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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an addendum to my last post: A continuation story with "Persephone" has now been posted on the male/female board under the title "Beneath a Cunning Eye".
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi Nanaea and Screamguy - Actually.......I'm knee deep in another story featuring "Persephone" and, well, there's a very good chance that she will make a reappearance on the boards here (just not under the Snape/OFC header) sometime soon.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Loved the imagery - very sensual. I would love to know how he knew her true name (and what it was), but if you're finished, you're finished. I can respect that.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are you really going to end it like that? Argh! Oh the frustration, beautifully done yes, but how did he know her true name? Oh the suspense is killing me.Well written once again but man, this seems like a continuation is needed. Or maybe its just me, heh. Also, what does Harry Potter have to do with the storyline? Merely a token object of forbidden desire?
Well I guess I'll never know . . . .
Well I guess I'll never know . . . .
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHapter 3-Excellent! What a way to end a story!
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks Screamguy, Snape's Pet and Undenialbly_Raziel, for all the positive feedback. The last two chapters almost wrote themselves - the idea elves and fairies really perked up and sort of took over and, before I knew it, a chapter had been written, then two. I've got all sorts of ideas churning about in the old brain now. Now, to find time and energy to sit down and write.
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great. I am glad you contemplated on more ideas to come up with two additional chapters. I was dissappointed when you said it was only to be a one-shot, but I was pleasantly suprised. The suspense was just enough to keep you on the edge of your seat. I usually don't read stories from the first point of view, but you handeled it wonderfully. Too bad its completed....
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn. I was just checking to see if you had written anything else. Too bad for me...
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The suspense is so great! Love this story so much! Glad you came up with more ideas. Keep writing I'm on pins and needles to find out what happens next. Well done!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it! Very interesting perspective. Hopefully you'll update soon!