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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!OMG! Please update soon! I love it! Great cliffhanger!
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH-EM-GEE!
thats some funny shit.
i like it alot
thats some funny shit.
i like it alot
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Claps for Hermione for making Draco a lobster...I laughed. Hard. :D
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude, your story kicks ass. I cant wait to see what happens next. Keep it up!
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL! oh my god love it cant wait to read more so please please update soon thanks
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it love it love it cant wait to read more please please update soon
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So far my review will be on the first chapter. Your writing style isn't at all bad. My problem with the story so far is the plot. It comes across as a bit trite and geered toward getting HG and DM in the most simplistic and obvious of ways. Why would any one believe Narcissa? Why are RW and HP acting like complete Asses over something HG can't control. I got to go but email me if you want.
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a good start! keep up the great work..
Although the summary could use a little more.. work..
but keep working on it!
Although the summary could use a little more.. work..
but keep working on it!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is a really interesting start! ^_^ I can't wait to see how Draco and Hermione come to like each other.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry to hear that you got some bad reviews, it happens to the best so try not to worry about it. i think that you have good potential with the story though it feels like it needs a little more substance to it in some places. keep up the good work and i look foward to reading more!