rate_review Reviews

What a fabulous fic! I love the romantic feeling that you kept throughout the story!
Plus this pairing is great;)

I'll go easy with you, since it is your first femmeslash. This story didn't have any flow to it. most people do this with their first stories, and god knows mine all probably suck, but the story seemed real choppy and it sounded like you were fighting the story. It felt like maybe you didn't like what you were doing with it, or got bored half way through, but were still determined to finish it. At the same time, I saw potential here, so keep writing and you'll get the hang of it eventually

That is really good! Yesh! Sequel! I am a hopeless romantic too. x.x So don't worry. You're not alone.

its cool, a little fluffy fic once in a while is great. Though a little less hopeless banter would be nice, but other than that stick with it-good work.