rate_review Reviews

Hello,
I Do like your story so far, the plot has a lot of potential. On Correction i must advise is you are confusing legilamancy, and occlumency. legilamancy is the art of accessing thought and feelings of another person and interpreting them, occlumency is the magical defense of the mind from external penetration.

Keep up the good work,
Lucius

I enjoyed reading this story very much. You handled the skipping of time very well, the only thing that i missed was the weasley's and hermione's reaction to all the new information on harry. But it was still a great story!

This story moved a bit quickly (more details would have been nice). However, this was an enjoyable read with a happy ending.

Good story. Could have been longer and expanded more however.

this was a very very good story, i hope you will write a other one
keep writing
bye bye

Chapters 4 to Epilogue - A very enjoyable story. Well paced and well constructed. No overt slash sex - would appeal to Het fans as much as Slash fans. Thanks for a fun read.