rate_review Reviews

THIS WAS A VERY VERY GOOD STORY
THANK YOU FOR WRAITING IT
BYE BYE

It's a good fic - a bit to much dramatic's but eyouable.

Hi i am a new reader to this site and have loved reading this wonderful story.I love harry and lucius together especially when harry gets to have the family he's always wanted.OK now rigel is the heir to the black estate,merope is the heir to the potter estate, and i assume that milos is harry and lucius youngest son as he is the heir to the snape estate,so where does that leave larisa their youngest daughter,will she get a share of the potter estae with merope or seeing as harry is the slytherine heir will she inherit that estate if there is anything to inherit.Just wondered about that.regrds helena.

REPLY TO HELENA:

I think that Severus is planning on Larisa and Milos sharing... but as an adult, she will be the one to blend the Gryffindor and Slytherin families into one. (Poor Travis)

Thanks for the intriguing question.

i just have to say one thing "WOW"

Wow, I must say that I loved the first time and I loved even more the second time I read this story.
BRAVO
Phoenix 5

Thank you for a most enjoyable story!!!! Evil Bumblydor, bad, bad! (house-elf speak). A well rounded plot with lots of bright ideas. I was a bit dissappointed that the Malfoy's only had the twins, after all, the Snape's also needed an heir. The other students were such a big part of the story for most of it I was also sad not to know how things ended for them as well. Did Draco and his wife have children? And what about Dumbledor? Did he finally get the boot from Hogwartz? Sory for those questions, just my personal views. Otherwise, the information and completed story was wonderfully well rounded and very satisfying. I hope you write more!!!! I'll be adding you to my must read list of authors ;)

Excellent start. Poor Harry :( I like the way you've elevated the 'background' characters to the importance they deserve

Chapter 2 - Another excellent chapter. Albus's reaction was interesting... it's nice to see someone else in control for once.

Chapter 3 - "Someone had done an amazing job of second-guessing him" and someone has done an amazing job of writing a fan fic. Excellent fic!!!