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by Tigerrr

schedule March 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I would so love to read this story but the font is all messy wierd...looks like somesort of system code.
schedule November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a fabulous story! Have you ever considered posting it on Granger Enchanted, I think the readers there would love it, too. I especially loved the clock, it was perfectly done! Again, you have done very well with this story.
person lisa
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about your AN at the top of chapter 3, the author of HP repeatedly states that a spell is only as strong as the user and their intent... Severus is a 'potent' wizard and he really didn't like Remus after years of torture and the scare of almost being killed by him... I would say that he probably put more power behind that spell that he really should have... but that is just a theory of my own... LOL it could just be that different directors had different visions!
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"...there were only so many times one could masturbate before tiring of it and wanting the real thing."

Coming from a woman, damn straight.

So far I like the development. I know it's finished (and has been a while), but I did want to let you know I'm enjoying it.
person GuiltyPleasures
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story and I enjoyed it a lot. The plot was great (who doesn't like the idea of a Severus and Lucius sandwich), and it was written well too. The only problem I had with it was that the children seemed much too young for their ages. Augustus was acting/speaking more like an 18 month old than a three year old.
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Siri19
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. Are you going to wrie a sequel to this story. Please write one. I love the ship of Severus Snape Hermione Granger and Lucius Malfoy. Lucius is really Luscious and Severus is always Snarky. Hermione is awesome with both Death Eaters. Keep up the great work. Augustus and Tamara are awesome. Do Lucius, Hermione, and Severus have anymore kids? Who do their kids marry?
person purrfus
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed very much - possibly more if also Snape / Malfoy. Thanks for writing.

The parties and S/L reactions were a blast.
person Adriann Sinn
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say this story was everyhting and more that I wanted when I went out looking for something to read. i wanted something passable, this wa funny and entertaining and well written. I don't review. like ever. I thought this sotry was wicked. I'm about to reread.
Keep up the good work.