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for The List

by Ms_Figg

person ccrawley
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You just knew he was going to get that list. But what is in store for the detention. Maybe they get to explore the list??
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, well. Hermione has found herself between a rock and a hard place so to speak. I can't wait to see how she answers this question. Update again and soon.

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany
person Obsidian_Hair
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, do I see another long story coming up?! I hope so :-) Looks promising so far! Since you are number one in the update department, I won't even write 'update soon'... little sense in that, which is one thing, among many, that makes your stories so outstanding. What I noticed the other day was, that the more action there was in the story, the lesser the 'period/dot' things were. Nice!! Makes it even more dynamic!! Keep it up! :-)
person droxy
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I imagine he does need a drink....

Got an eye full that one :)
person McHell
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!
I like lists.
I'm a list maker.
I like Snape.
I like Hermione!
Is this a nasty mean Snape?

Update soon!!
person Marsha
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1 - Another great beginning. Just got finished with your New Years story and yes!!!! there's already a new story up. Notice he skipped right past most of the list to last word. Wonder how much of the list he's going review during her detention. Some of those words are pretty harsh. Thank you for a new story and your quick updates!
person shelly
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, poor hermione. confess that he's the hottest most sexiest teacher in the world, or let him see that he is the hottest most sexiest teacher in the world? decisions, decisions. well, either way, severus is going to find out, so why not just let him look? saves her the embarassment of actually ahving to voice her desires, if you ask me. anyway, great story and please keep updating!
person Corazon
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As Hermione put it, "Shit. Shit. Shit." This story needs
no more pondering, just some more words on screen
so that I can read the discussion of the list and whatever
other activities should come of it. *evil grin*

I am about to close my eyes and take a nap and when
I awake, perhaps I shall be rewarded with another chapter?
*please, please, with a hippogriffhung Severus on top*

hehehehe...am in a weird mood, forgive me, but I do
like where this fic is headed.

Corazon
person Iris
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
In this story, I'm sticking with you, this should be good.. very good.. I always make such lists myself..
S ensual
E lectric
V icious
E nchanting
R ude (I like that..)
U seful (I know how to...)
S inful

I'd like to know what he's going to say
person JW
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 3 - boy, he sure is being a responsible adult and teacher here. The question is: what will HERMIONE do next - will she pursue Severus? Will she have to give him a reason why he should fulfill her wish? Maybe she can bet him double or nothing with those House points, get them back. Maybe I should just sit here and wait for your next chapter!!!