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by Ms_Figg

person TheAngelOfSilence
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story...chapter one with the whole "list" especially. You have a fantastic style!

Have one complaint, however....seem to remember from your last story....the promise of PWP starring Voldie, his concubines and his..........Slytherin serpent?
Hope you are still on for that one....I await it with disturbing eagerness..!

Meanwhile......well done again on this one. I have to say that you seem to be going from strength to strength.

AoS x
person Shilohdarke
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. I do look forward to more. Draco is such a git, and Severus is going to lose his heart to the girl that is determined to ignore her feelings. Perfect plot, perfect story. I wait anxiously for more. My only complaint... the chapters are short, and I read it way too fast! I wait patiently for your next update!
person K
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooh very yummy, can't wait for more.
person lilly
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Would I sound silly if I said I love you?? Not really love, LOVE but I love your stories. They are some of the best stories with Severus and Hermione in them. Please continue and update soon. I can not wait to find out what happens next.
person K
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh goody, interrogation. Love the little peek into Hermione's head of Snape fucking her. oooooh i can't wait for more treats.
person jmac
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
noooooooooo. evil evil cliffee.
person K
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hilarious, i just reviewed ch. 7 and then i see ch. 8, delicious btw, i hope draco doesn't get to fuck her in this story, it should be snape and only snape. although snape could catch them in a compromising position and beat the shit out of malfoy.
person Denise
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chp 7: OOO now she has a choice. Professor Snape or Draco. YUM!! I wonder who she will pick. I would probably pick Draco, considering I already chose my husband and he almost a spitting image of Draco....but thats me. I also have a few questions considering the story:

1. Do you plan on letting Draco fuck Hermione?

2. Are you going to write this story all the way through Voldemort's death or victory?

Basically, where exactly is the story headed?
well, i cant wait to see what happens next, so please update soon!
person Nightqueen
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're killing me!! I do believe I've said this once before, you leave me hanging on the edge of a cliff ready to plunge to the bottom! Please tell me that Severus will stop any thought, plan or action that the ferret can come up with!! That kiss between Draco and Hermione was luke warm compared to the passionate embrace she shared just moments before with Severus. I'm counting on Severus being very possessive now that he's decided Hermione has stirred his passions unlike any other woman before. More please!!!!!!!!
person ShilohDarke
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good! I am enjoying it very much.I look forward to the next update!