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person JW
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 9 - PS - ooh, that Draco is one smooth liar!!!
person ChasteBlush
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh heaven
that was brillaint, i am loving this fic, i hope you update regularlyu cause i only juist found it and need mroe already, please update as soon as possible,

ChasteBlush
x x x
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah..Now were getting sum where...this should be good...lol
Update soon!
person French girl
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was really beautiful.
I felt the love through Hermione's words, it was so touching that I cried.
I loved the way Snape reacted.
I worry about Hermione, Draco had never seemed so dangerous.
I hope Snape will keep an eye on her.
person Applekissis
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man...This story just keeps getting better and i am so luving it.....!!!!!!
person Pearle
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great, if I take a nap will more magically appear?


Chapter 6 - Arrrg! Ron is such a prat. Draco is smooth. I wonder if he actually did get to Hermione and found her willing (and submissive) if he would still choose to degrade her? Of course, he's Draco, and to do Lucius justice would have to be cold and superior. Of course I wouldn't write Severus off just yet. Severus using legilimency improperly, tsk, tsk. Hasn't anyone told him eavesdroppers never come to any good?


Chapter 7 - Manipulative little ferret! And Hermione - get a clue. And they say men think with the wrong head?


Chapter 8 - Ack! Sex by proximity? She's horny, Snape started something and Draco wants to finish it? No, no one is Sevie. One kiss and she will walk away. All right a kiss, a fondle, maybe a grope. But that's it. Severus - 1, Draco - 0 (for now).


Time to check for a new chapter...Grin

:::nudge - nudge - new chapter :::
.....Until next time~~~~Pearle
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What's Draco going to do now? I hope Hermione sees through him. I also can't wait to see how Severus is going to react when he finally gives in to Hermione! Update soon! I can't wait to read more!

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany
person Miepje
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Malfay is just begging for a little humiliation himself!! Or a hex or two... Please? ^^

A great story so far and now looking forward to the confrontation between Hermione and Snape!
person calamitysandra
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gahhhhh!!!
So, so HOT!!!

More! NOW!

Lemons!

Sandra
person Denise
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chp 8: Well, well, well. Snape makes a move on Hermione!! And now Draco wants to talk. doestn soud good. I hope Hermione doesnt do anythign stupid though. Please update soon!