rate_review Reviews

That. Was. Disturbing. And I loved every part of it. You managed to write as if one sat right in Draco's head,listening to that silent discussion. Though I'm still not too sure who that other one was, or where it came from... Great. Simply great.

Wow! Just...wow! Good though. I enjoyed...even if it was a little er screwed up. *blinks* Wow!

Well ... I think I like it. I can't describe why, but it all does make a certain kind of sense. A sick, twisted sort of sense, but sense none the less. I like the way the story is told. It's like nothing I've read before, except perhaps something from Stephen King one of his short stories maybe. In any case, I like it. Good work.

wow. didn't quite know what i was getting into, but this was an amazing piece of work.

the dialogues and internal monolodues were some of the best i've read and even though he killed her, my heart went out to him. i think that one line summed it up, :Harry Potter good, Draco Malfor bad" and that is what is so frustrating! and the way Harry treated him, before he got to where he was, I could so see happening.

anyway great job!

~Sara~

That was amazing. Your thoughts on time and lords and god, life and death, were mind blowing. I take philosophy courses and your thoughts were better than some things Ive read for class. It really resonated with me. Your story was interesting to, the part with Draco and Hermione, but the most interesting part was not the story but the thoughts of the voice in the head.

I was wondering if i could quote you. I love quotes and write them everywhere from profiles to papers. So i was wondering if i could, and how i should.

Luckylisi426@yahoo.com

Seriously, that was a really evocative peice of writing.