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person nessie
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that last bit really made me smile. it turned out really good.
person Pam
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, he can be evil, but we all love that about him....Have a Happy New Year, and look forward to reading more of your stories. Thanks.
person JW
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 4 - hey, they have all of New Year's Day off for fun and games. Her second time shouldn't be as painful, now that she knows what to expect and her body is in shape. Once more into the fray, Figgy? (reader makes puppy eyes) She can always get a book and then ask him to demonstrate certain positions for her? As for "no impersonal sex" - well, I think prostitutes can argue that there IS such a thing as "impersonal sex" with clients.
person JW
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PS - I totally agree that she can be book-smart and men-dumb. But she can learn from this and then get what she wants from him - a repeat performance. :=)
person French girl
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had not much time to review the last days but I want to wish you a wonderfull new year, full of happiness, a good health for you ,your family and your friends, and a job at home (if my memory is good).
Thank you for the magnificent work you did this year, I hope (selfishly) that the new year will keep you still so well inspired.
person liz
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hurry up with ch. 2!!! loved the last snape/hermione one, the one in the RoR
person ccrawley
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like the story. Looking forward to the next chapter. Hm, what is the snake up to?
person JW
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 2 - PS - if she's a smart witch, insatiable for learning, when he finishes at midnight she'll use her wand to reset the chiming clock to - oh, say.... seven o'clock, and then they can get in more "practice"!
person Sea
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a delightful New Year's Eve treat!
person Alyssa
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with you. Inside the Blackest Heart had a Hermione who was VERY submissive until her powers began to fully manifest. It's more half and half with your Hermione's. I prefer one that is equal to Snape. Because I couldn't see him wanting someone that was not a match for him.

I'm with you. Like the story so far.