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for All I Ever Wanted

by Samaelthekind

person lizzy
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this story for a while now, and I must say that I am quite enjoying it. You are a remarkable and coherent writer. I also just wanted to point out that Madam Malkin's is in Diagon Alley, not Hogsmeade. The clothing store in Hogsmeade is called Gladrags.
person a dragonbreath
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is "Brief Respite" chapter 29 or chapter 30? Maybe you should have just made chapter 11a chapter 11 and made chapter 11b chapter 12...
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 31! I love their relationship! Perfect! They are truly meant for each other!
person swampthang
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Give me more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Amessis
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done! I loved that their dinner went so well. Can't wait for more.
person Chiaki Dark
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well call me tickled and slap me silly!!
That was a FANTASTIC romantic follow up to that last steamy chapter.
Gosh-some of those scenes made my heart ache. And I love that you
put that bit where the boys just HOLD each other. My romantic soul has
been happily fed. I absolutely cannot wait for Pansy's Slytherin hosted
bash. It'd be a GREAT place to debut Harry in his new wardrobe, would it
not? *nudges you and winks* And maybe... there could be an after
party for two and Draco's new itty bitty undies??? n_n HEH. Ohhhhhh
it's gonna be good. Even when the angst comes-cause that's life, right?-
I'm going to always look forward to your romance. Brava, author! Till
your next update!! *waves the HarryxDraco banner beaming*
person ura
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice happy chapter.
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for chapter 30! McGonagall is going to have a fit!
person Rhiannon Uerch Llewelyn
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!! That was HOT!!!!! OOoooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh.................... (Begins to melt on the computer chair... developing shit happy sappy pissing HUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGE mushy smile on face. Builds up teary corner to eyes. Reaches for big hankie & blows nose in watterly adulation...) That was so damn SWEEET!!!!! ;P
person Rhiannon Uerch Llewelyn
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!! WATERY adulation!! WATERY!!!! Use the RIGHT words why don't I.... Well, dunno really. Why DID I? Dunno... *snicker* ^.--