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for All I Ever Wanted

by Samaelthekind

person JJ
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You were in a very deep, contemplative mood when you wrote that chapter, huh? Nice work.
person scully
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good job on the last two chapters. lucius' Kiss was appropriately somber. i hope that the letter he left for draco will give him a measure of peace. it's just too bad that lucius realised so much too late.
great blowjob scene--both wtih draco giving then harry giving. very sexy. i find it hard to believe that harry wouldn't wake up when draco was riding him tho! he must have been REALLY tired! LOL!
person ura
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. I am glad that Lucius wrote an appology letter to his son. It means a lot to Draco.
I also liked musings of Shacklebolt. Hopefully, they reflect what many others on the Light Side could think.
person anjellic
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful and awe-inspiring. I can't even begin to describe the feelings I experienced during this chapter. Just a thousand thank yous for this one!
person Amessis
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! That brought me to tears! So beautiful, I really didn't expect to feel that after previosly seeing Lucius in this story. That was so amazing.
person sbkar
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 34: Again, I'm happy to encourage good work.

This chapter was very powerful, in language and emotion.
person thrnbrooke
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was amazing! I can't wait for chapter 35!
person Heidi
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK, glad that chapter is over with... I need a handkerchief... now my nose is all clogged up too... By the way, you have my deepest sympathy. Imagine having to listen to Top of the Pops or whatever *shudders* I dearly hope the next chapter isn't inspired by Britney Spears ;-)
person Amessis
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was fun! It was nice that they got some good relaxing time in before the really bad stuff has to come. Loved the idea that poor Snape had to empty his memory after that one!
person Heidi
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for your special word, aren't you the sweetie? If I had the energy i'd be bouncing up and down, but as I still are caught with the cold from hell I'll settle for a YAY! Dreading the next chapter, poor Draco. Tip; if you need inspiration for a mpreg-fic look up the story "Mistakes" here on affnet, it is a beautiful story really. It's not finished though, I suspect that the author isn't a beliver in frequent updates. In the meantime, keep rocking my world. :-)Kisses