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WOW... i am at a complete loss of words.. WOW is all that comes to mind right now... WOW

GAH!!!!!!!!!! NOW what???!!! Evil, EEEEEEEEEEEEvil cliffie!!!! Did I mentione you were evil? GOD DAMN IT YOU A.R.E!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Talk about getting fucked... *smirk*

Another piece of advice that is equaly simple: read your ASS off. Both good and bad authors so you can gauge where you are in style, etc... learning what not to do and absorbing good techniques that you can twine into your own style. Never, NEVER stop improving yourself. Erotica should be as if you got fucked as never before, though all in the mind. (And often the "helping hand") It's an artform that has no side effects... 'cept for repeatedly missing the bus to work, staying up until 5 in the morning and having EXTREMELY naughty thoughts when dealing with a pair of hot guys who are naught but customers at work... they're just good friends, you understand...

*snicker*

AAAAAAAAAaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh life.....

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Oh I can't wait for more! Need chapter 15! Who is it? Will Draco lose his throne? Or can he lie his way out of this trouble? Will Harry get hurt in the process?

Uh oh! Need chapter 12! Who is after his postion as crown prince? What happens? Need more!

Fucking HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Not Harry's precious gift to Draco!!!! NOOOOOOnonononononoonono....... Dear god your cliffies are so fucking CRUEL!!!! UGH!!!!! (Pounds head on the desk in agonized torture...) *embittered sigh* Why do people so relish destroying others?

Yes, stuff is flowing better, much better!! Keep it up!! (Hands over bag of prunes to REALLY keep things flowing better!!) Heh..

I think their gifts were perfect!! Both symbolic, both rare and precious. Each is unique to what the character wished to say. The only problem is that Harry can wear his and keep it secret with relative ease, whereas Draco cannot. Hence its inception into infammy... When we have everything to lose, we can be broken as never else...

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"Well, Ron," Harry leaned forward with an intent gaze that made Ron suddenly nervous, "Draco didn't charm me...but I am his studpuppet...and it's working out great. We're great in the sack together...legendary actually, I pound him into the mattress like a porn star and he makes me feel like God. Orgasms, Ron, we have them... lots of them... whole pots of 'em, we rattle 'em off like machine guns. He's got an ass that never quits and I love getting in it!" Ron suddenly slid out of his chair and moved toward the door, white and shaking.
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(Absolutely DYING of laughter!!!!) GOD that was funny!!! Beautiful!!! Oh, I'm sorry--- (Bends over & busts gut with positively evil snort) Oh dear oh dear... I can picture that so good it ain't good!!

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EX-cuse me?!! I am NOT anonymous!!! Somethin' didn't work good...

I love how you describe things!
" Harry looked at his lover with those piercing green eyes that bored through Draco's soul like twin diamond drills. " XD! <3
I also love your sense oh hurmour! Keep it up!

And your sense of humour is amazing! XD! Keep it up!

"He could could wait, it would just make tomorrow night all the more special." -Chapter 10! Just thought you ought to know...

Otherwise, I LOVE THIS STORY! I have a question for you, so if you could email me that would be great.

wonderful updates!!!
i'm wandering who is the person that wants to take Dracos spot as Slyth. prince is...hmmm...guess i'll just have to wait until you're ready to reveal them!!!!!!!
please update soon!!!!