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for All I Ever Wanted

by Samaelthekind

person MagicChic82
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just saying again how much I love this story. I'm not a very sappy/romantic person usually, but this story brings out that side in me. :D
person Chiaki Dark
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL! Blow jobs usually don't excite me anymore, but that stuff was sweat-inspiring! Ha! I love the love between the boys, and I hope to read more when Harry-baby is all better. I'd like to see Draco get to top at least once myself, but I really do enjoy a bossy little bottom Draco. I look forward to more updates from you, and even more stories! Yay! :]
person Alison
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great meeting, great ideas, great mentoring, great chapter! Keep it up! =o)
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwww! that was such a sweet speech from snape! and bully for draco, taking control of slytherin for the better that way! can't wait to see what harry thinks of it--and the rest of the school! i'm sure everyone will initially think that slytherins being helpful is a big fat plot of some kind, but hopefully they will come around soon.

and--wow--i got mentioned in an author's note! i feel so honoured! :) thanks! tho i meant every word of my review, honestly. interesting to know that you are using your past experiences as part of your inspiration. pretty cool. i'm not gay and i don't have a dick, so when i write slash i have to go a lot on imagination. :)

great chapter--just one teeny note--it is spelled LUCIUS. No "O" in name. :)

can't wait to see what happens next--need some more harry and draco lovin! :)
person scully
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, i don't know when I've laughed so hard! i am still wiping the tears of mirth from my eyes as i type this. the line from Pulp Fiction--classic! Malfoy Chain-Hex Massacre? LOVE IT! and the very very best:" Every few sentences into a chat was disrupted by sudden, off the cuff comments like, "...and I'm so poorly hung I couldn't satisfy a lonesome Guinea Pig..." and similar comments. Eventually he drifted into a life of alchoholism and hermitage, dying young, mourned by none." BWHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHA! That was hysterical!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok, i think i'm slightly calmer now. great chapter, obviously. so glad that draco got to serve up vengence with such style. and go harry for healing draco. and go snape for realising that harry really loves draco and letting him go see draco even tho snape really wanted to blame him for everything. hmm, did that make sense? hope so! i really lov e this story and i'm a bit sad that i only have one more left to read before i am caught up!
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. wow. can i just say...wow. chapters 11a and 11b...i've seldom come across something so beautiful and moving and HOT and well-written. i stand in awe of your talent to put such images in print. the imagery you use, the way you draw pictures with words, the way you make the writer FEEL what you want them to feel...amazing. absolutely amazing. i don't even have the words to say how stunned i feel after reading those 2 chapters, i feel like i witnessed something holy, almost. i'll say it again...wow.
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I need chapter 19! Great plans! I hope he can make them come true. He wants to see Lucius. Is that wise?
person Kitten
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow I loved it. It was beautiful. You are a very talented writer. I loved how Draco got the slytherins back that was awsome. Its kool that you have Craybe and Goyle and Blaise all on Draco side. It makes it more enjoyable. Finally a story where Ron accepts Harry and Draco there are too many stories where it either takes Ron forever to accept it or he doesn't accept it at all. I really loved it. Is there going to be more or is it complete?
person jw
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep it coming
person Amessis
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job on this again! I loved their chat.