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for All I Ever Wanted

by Samaelthekind

person Heidi
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank u, guess I'm not leaving quite yet. Hope you didn't rewrite anything because of my last review *laughs* Looking forward to next chapter, you left us with quite a cliffie there ;.)
person DN
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just spent the last 21 hours reading this story from beginning to end non-stop. Great story, but you are a real SON-OF-A-BITCH to end the last chapter the way you did. PLEASE do not aboanded this story (unlike some other authors) and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Bye.
person DN
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I mean 2 hours, not 21 hours
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oddly the first thing I said when I saw the movie and Draco's character was introduced was ,"Oh my God, give that little blond queen a few years and he'll be lipsynching Madonna for certain." He may stray from the fold for a chapter sometime, but he will stay a bottom through and through.

(Absolutely gushing nosebleed from mental picture, laughing SO damn hard gut is on the sidewalk laughing with me!!) I'm sorry!! *wheeze* I'm sorry, that was beautiful!!! This is not a fic review but a pissing funny AN commentary!!
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"As subtle as an anemone, Draco slowly engulfed and devoured his prey."

My god, I have NEVER seen that analogy used before and it is as sexy as HELL!! Fluid, graceful, tentative, (blond...), subtle, liquid... gently alive...

*softly breathing in wanton peace*

You are GOOD!!! Keep it up!! Never stop getting better, finess, style, grace & sensuality with a soul. And the most BRUTAL CLIFFIES!!!!!!!!!!!

(Clutching own throat in desperation) Is Harry OK?? WHAT HAPPENED???!!!! AAARRRGGGGHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
>.<
person Taja Reyul
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loving it so far. Not usually a fan of Harry/Draco, but then most fics of that pairing are written far out of character one way or another. Aside from the fact that I don't really see Harry as gay (bi, maybe) you seem to have avoided that pitfall. I'll be reading the rest with lively interest.
Thanks for the entertainment.
person Julie
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have improved tremendously since I first started reading! It
person Flamesky
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was certainly a long time since I ever read or well, found a story like yours. Best of all, I had it under my nose all this time and clearly didn
person Darkate
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great! Flat sexy and funny as hell. I laughed myself sick reading that last bit with Snape at the end of chapter 7. And Harry taunting Ron about Draco was brilliant!--porn star...God...machine guns *snickers* I kept bursting out in giggles for no reason all day at the most inopportune moments. I'm serious. I got very strange looks from people, and i couldn't even explain to them why in a way that they would understand. It's all your fault! lol
person Heidi
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, not very happy about the way this is going. Sorry to say, but if this is turning into one of the too many top!Draco fics I'm outta here. Will give the next couple of chapters a go though, just in case the wind blows the other way again.