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for All I Ever Wanted

by Samaelthekind

person Alison
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I wish I had 'your' Malfoy Manor! And they haven't even gone inside it yet! =o) Great conversations with Lucius. The jerk! Update soon please.
person never_tempt
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That ending was a good way to relieve the angst buildup from the prison visit. Wonderful and waiting for the next chapter. Can you see a naked baby Draco on a Brown bearskin rug or Black grizzly bear rug in front of a fireplace? (Would have to be that versus a white one, his complexion would wash him out on a light one). Or with his first lolly. I could go on but that's your job, and a fine job you are doing.
person scully
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah, go harry! kick lucius' ass! i love the fact that harry slapped him! talk about an insult! and im glad harry is straightened out with his fear/anger issues (or on the way to being straightened out)--out-of-countrol, raging harry was a little scary! wonder what meeting narcissa will be like. and i hope harry doesnt get into more trouble by going there--cuz then he and draco might lose their private space! eeeps!
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for chapter 28! I'm soooo glad Harry told Lucius off! How will Narcissa react? Need more!
person Alison
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Update soon please. I can't wait to find out what LM and DM talk about! =o)
person Amessis
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lucius was just awful! Go Harry!
person rafiq
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love Harry/Draco stories and this one of the best ever because you are such a good writer. I hope it never ends.
person MagicChic82
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A couple things. Draco was born June 5, the same year as Harry, so he'd only be 17. Also, they can't apparate out of Hogwarts. Haven't you read "Hogwarts, A History?" *rolls eyes* Just kidding. I can't wait to see how the meeting went.
person JJ
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Didn't Harry tell Draco he saw him die in Hogsmead????? And Draco wants to go to town to get him some clothes????? AAAAaaaawwwwwww, you've set him up to die just when he's likable (sad face). And that hint about the face bruising shouldn't be too bad. After all, Draco got it in the fight when Harry was trying to defend him. Trust Lucius to take it the wrong way. I would if my kid came home like that. So, is Lucius gonna be the sorry, repentant dad or the zealous, overbearing death eater????

P.S. It's about time someone included in their story that Dumbledore tried to help Harry emotionally after all the damage he goes through!!!! Kudo's!!!!
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I need chapter 27! What happens next? I wish Draco hadn't gone in there alone. Who knows what Lucius might say or do?