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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This looks to be so much fun!
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just finished the first chapter and I like your writing style very much. I can definitely see his longing for her but why doesn't she have more confidence in herself? She seemed shocked in the end of this chapter that he would have an erection in reaction to her contact... which is odd since Krum wanted her, and snogged her before- so it wasn't her first kiss. Ron wants her, and Cormac Mclaggen ravashed her under the mistletoe. She's pretty and intelligent- more than enough to attract the likes of Snape. Harry would also fight it I think- more so than Ron even, since Harry has had to endure the brunt of Severus' cruelty. Even so I really enjoyed this first chapter. I love AU as much as canon based stories. Will read the rest later!
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very hot! Please give us more! Despite HBP, I still love this Snape and Hermione, please, please give us more! Thanks for posting this here!
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i need a cold shower..right now....i am waiting for more oh please give me more snapey goodness or badness whichever you chose..amazing story........
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I recall this story from a long time ago, but it was never finished. I'm hoping that you are reposting this because you have finished it. I'd hate to get my hopes up for something still not finished.
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1-4 - great start!! Very happy to see Harry give Ron "The Talk" about his treatment of Hermione. Glad to see Hermy appreciate Severus and his "lessons," and I grinned madly at the comparison to "a third year with their first butterbeer" - perfect! Thank you for ignoring HBP; DENIAL is a wonderful place.
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story very much! Look forward to when you update
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Takes out fan and tries to cool off* Dear gods I think I melted into a puddle at the end of chapter 4. WOW......just.....WOW Please update soon. *runs to find her boyfriend*
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Found this first at Ashwinder, loved it there, and I still love it here. I really want you to finish this story. Wonderful talent.
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter please?... please?