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for What He Wants

by normaljean2

person SnapesPet30
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! Loved how he proposed to her! Could Ron be anymore of an idot, I can't believe he thought he could blackmail Severus lol. Look forward to your next update.
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a great chapter! They're finally married. I can't wait to see everyone's reaction. Especially Ron's! Update again and soon!

Tiffany
person Lyndie578
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for such another lovely chapter. I almost felt sorry for Ron, but he deserved what he got after trying to blackmail my favorite snarky PM! Thanks for posting so quickly!
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story! I can't wait to read more! Please update again and soon!

Tiffany
person SiriuslySevered
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just two chapters and I'm addicted to your story!

More, please!
person firewall
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 3 - Tricky little devil that Severus is...getting her all het up and then that's it! Hahahaha he is smooth.
person Angie30
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Extreamly Hot! *Fans face*
person firewall
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 2 - Ah the plot thickens...Ron suddenly and typically wants what he can no longer have...the Yule ball and Viktor Krum and Hermione anyone?...and now decides he can have Hermione if he sets his mind to it. Harry is very rational here and I loved his comment that he had talked to Snape and was okay with it...besides he'd kill him if he hurt her. lol

Looking forward to you next update.
person firewall
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 4 - Omigod, that was a very hot scene. Where on earth are you going from here?
person Edania
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
* mouth drops in shock* my god that was sexy. I mean wow you really have snape down. wow. I like this snape, not too romatic or too soft like i see in most stories..its more of the stalker , yet a little romatic types..my type of snape. Hope to see more.