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for What He Wants

by normaljean2

person June W
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 6 - this is so lovely, but you've scared me in this chapter with the bits about Hermione's reactions. "What, we're married???? Do I really want to be married" sort of reactions. Please make this a happy ending for them together! That means no Ron mucking things up!
person firewall
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 5 - Now Ron is usually a brilliant strategist; however, his impetuous side got to him this time. What was he thinking? Mind you he really tried very hard to intimidate Severus...it just didn't work and he was almost a puddle on the stone floor. This is a great story and I'm enjoying every chapter.
person Angie30
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Turns fan on to try and cool off* Extreamly hot and erotic as hell! Well done!!!!! I look forward to the next installment.
person Bree
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I absolutely love it!!! Please continue!! I love a possesive Snape :)
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome chapter! YAY! SHE SAID YES! I can't wait to read more! Update agan and soon!

Tiffany
person Laura
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wooo, what a hot, fabulous story! I love this Severus! You write bautifully and I'm looking forward to more.
Laura
person Kate
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you portray Snape and his interactions with Ron...I can't wait for the next chapter.
person henio
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH God i love it. Plzzzzz update soon.
person Ms_Figg
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful. Please update soon, soon soon!
person Lemurbaby
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is fucking brilliant. I am hooked, and it gives me that special little feeling in my tummy. Cheers.