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for What He Wants

by normaljean2

person firewall
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1 - I was just checking out the first chapter again because a comment was niggling at the back of my mind and I found it. I sincerely hope that this never comes to light to Ron or anyone else because it will cause all sorts of problems. Before the relationship began, Severus was thinking:

She was to be his payment for services rendered, though he would never tell her such a thing. He actually respected her far too much to let such an archaic idea spill from his lips in her presence.

Can you just imagine what will happen if Ron gets hold of this thought?! It also shows how far Snape has come in his relationship with her.
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome.....i am just in awe of this story..its so erotic and seductive yet romantic and sweet...I hope u update more real soon
person K
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooooooh update, love the story, just read all of it.
person septentrion
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 7 : I'm so glad to see the story wasn't abandoned. Sure things are going to be interesting with Ron.
person SnapesPet30
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Grins* This chapter was great and hot! LOL I knew Ron was being stupid but yeesh, He is in for quite a shock when he finds out she already married Snape.
I hope he does try and touch her I want to see the little pain get a jolt *evil little grin* . Keep up the great work and I look forward to another great update.
person mbg
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it love it love it!
person Chavela
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was brilliant. I loved it. I can't wait till you continue.
person June W
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 7 - ooh, so she can tell Harry she's married.... I hope he takes it VERY well, 'cuz someone will need to keep an eye on Ron. And will Dumbledore let Hermione move into Severus' quarters since they're married? Should she take her NEWTs early? Will he parents want a Muggle wedding? And where's the next chapter, dear Bunny? Heh-heh! Thanks for updating!!
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome update! I can't wait to see how Harry reacts. As well as Ron's next move. Not that it will do any good, but oh well. Keep up the great writing.

Tiffany