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More than a decade you can write the next chapter please this is so funny i love it come back

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

wow snape is quite the seducer I'd love to have a male bewitch and ensnare me like this

Nice done!!! I like the character snape represents in your story. So possessive, but at the same time willing to accept her decisions!!! Thanks!!!

I heard about your story when somebody recommended it to me (I think this was on WIKTT). I have to say, it's well-written, interesting, and just so good. I'm glad you've updated, and I can't wait to read more of this awesome story. So please hurry up and update again soon! I'll give you a cookie if you do! *Tries to entice you with a cookie* Oooh, a cookie! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

First off, I love your name and absolutely adore Zorro the Gay Blade. Have really enjoyed this story so far. I can't say I'm a Ron fan, but really like him in this role of other man/comic relief. Your Severus and Hermione are delicious in their own rights and are just fabulous together. You have written their passion for one another so very well indeed. If there were something to criticize I'd mention it here. Unfortunately there is no denying this huge smile you have plastered on my face - see? I look just like this! : ) Thank you for a joy of a read. I look forward to your updates.

I have only just found your story. Talk about hot! It sizzles.
Brilliant interplay between all your characters. Very well written.
It has gone on my favourites, and hope for a update soon.

I love how, for at least a short time, Hermione and Severus share a [wonderful] secret just between the two of them. I do think your portrayal of Harry and Hermione's friendship and loyalty is pretty accurate, but something drastic had to have happened during the rest of the war with Voldemort to change Harry's opinion of Snape, especially quelling his anger enough for Harry to be comfortable enough with Snape to support Hermione marrying "The Git". I know this is pre HBP, but still it's a strech. Having said that, I still accept your Harry and definitely the rest of this great story! I'm anxious to see Harry's and Ron's reactions. Thanks for the chapters!

Ch 7 - Severus is falling quite nicely into the married routine, isn't he? lol Loved the rhyme that Hermione made up. Now Ron...he did well waiting and his strategy is perfect but he forgot to take into consideration others were involved...You can't control everything. Mind you Severus seems to be doing an admirable job at directing things. Another wonderful chapter.