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for A Last Request

by bellgirl

person moreta
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay...another chapter... : ) i knew it was draco...and he told her he loves her...awww....but why doesn't she say it back...and oh no, her dad is acting horrible...oh well at least her mom is being understanding...
person Redlightspin
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how romantic
person curlyq2713
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
why wouldn't hermione tell the guy she loves that she loves him? yay for updating.

just to let you know, if you kill draco off you will break every last one of our hearts.

;-)
person di
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is cute. it's really cute i like the way you put all the characters emotion into the stroy.good job
person fiona
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter i really did enjoy it, don't worry it was a great building chapter all stories need them! i knew it was draco, lol. i really loved the sex scene it was hottttt up against the post, so awesome! loved the interaction between draco and hermione, i love it when he talks like that! And with her and her parents it felt real good job and update soon!
person lemonade
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Her parents are pretty well informed about the war, but I'm surprised Hermione didn't tell them everything. And I was beginning to suspect that Calvin was a polyjuiced Draco for a while, there, but you had them both in a room together, so that proves that theory wrong. ;D Can't wait for more chapters, glad you're feeling better.
person Juls
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! that was great!!! but i can't help but feel a little iffy with draco just turning up out of the blue.... it seems a little bit far fetched.. but still i loved that he came back 2 c her!! its soo sweet & cute!!!! i just hope he'll be there for the baby.. it would be a pity if he wasn't.. anyways mad mad add & update soonies!!
person Darian
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yea!!! So glad you updated! Thank you may we have another?!!!
person Chavela
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*To be honest I didn
person moreta
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i've been waiting for the next chapter...please update soon...