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by bellgirl

person Vicky
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bring Draco Back!!! <33333 It was nice, a little rushed but I loved it just the same! Keep writing!! :D
person firefairy21
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved the story and i hope you continue I think this chapter was a great begining of a fantastic story (with hopefully a min of 5 chapters. hope to see an update soon

big fan
firefairy
person Anon
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!! that was soooooooo good. PLEASE continue
person Little Tiny Bee
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don't leave this as a one shot. And... also preferably not a "ten years later..." type story. This has real potenial! I really liked it so please keep writing!
person aleja221
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please let there be more this is great
person estelle
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing you can't leave it there please write more
person estelle
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing you can't leave it there please write more
person Jaime
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!

Okay that was my first reaction. The second: Please please please continue this story. I think it's worth at least a second part to wrap up what happens to Hermione, the gender of the child (I hope it's a boy), and what happens to Draco (whether he lives or not). So even if you don't write it into a multi-chapter phenomenon, you should at least give it a second part to wrap up the loose ends because right now, it's loose. My head is going "What happens to Draco? What about Hermione? Harry? Ron? The baby?"

Please update, and please email me when you do.
person dee
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi
there's a lot of slash stories on this site but yours was the best!Im still trying to get the mental images out of my head!Cud you please, please, comment on my story it's in movies > trainspotting > about spud It's my first story and i never got to finish it. Be as evil and as nasty as u want.
person Bree
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you don't end it are you gonna bring him back? It was bittersweet, but great all the same. But if you keep writing would you bring him back only for him to be taken away again?