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for A Last Request

by bellgirl

person Rel
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this and hope you continue. I will keep checking just incase!!!!
person Beth
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT GREAT GREAT STORY. ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS.
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh you have to continue this story it was beautiful and I would really like to see what happens now Hermione is with child and if Draco was killed good work
person jen
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
noo you can't keep it as a one-shot! ill die! i loved it. it's such a different plot than any other i've read. very very original. ooh you have to keep going!

great job
person sarah
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was AWSOME. Its BRILLIANT. has such great potential!!! itd be AWSOME to have it as a full story w/chapters and all. and have like harry & ron and everyone else's reactions to it! i love how its not all fluff fluff. you kno. but the plot line, the idea of it is just brilliant. ive never read any story like this! pleassseeeeee keep writing
person Arlene
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it! I wanna see and read how Hermione tells everyone, her pregnancy, more of her thoughts, and I really really hope she has a baby boy - a little Draco Malfoy! OH, that would be too cute! Um, but I'm unsure if I want Draco alive or dead.
person Priscilla
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story continue it. It would be awesme if she had 2 twin boys instead of people always putting a girl and boy it gets old ya know
person loonylovegood
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is a great fic!!! You simply CANNOT end the story like that!!! Do continue and update it!!!!
person slouchyduck
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whew...i think it's getting warm in here. draco's "pillow talk" is HOT. please, don't let this be the end of the story. if hermione and draco don't find a way to be together after this, it would be terrible. even if it's only so i can see him talk dirty again. LOL
person mmfcfa
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was really good. Don't keep it as a one-shot. Continue the theme with Draco surviving and fighting to get back Hermione and his child.