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by bellgirl

person LiYan
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is terrific, I like that he went to Hermione because he knew she would love the child and make the Malfoy name good. I hope you do write more, I mean we don't even know if it's a boy or girl! I hope Draco made it!
person Anon
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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person Just Once
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story! Please, please expand it!
person Alice
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is written so well, it shouldnt be a one shot, continue please :)
person envi78
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story. The Draco and Hermione pairing is harder to write after HBP, but this did a wonderful job. I definitely want to hear more. The writing was superb.
person KrazyKiwi
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh... That was really beautiful. I enjoyed reading so much ... please write a sequal to it. I can't wait to read that if it gets written. I want to see what happens later on ...
Thanks a bunch for writing this!
person spanky_mcwhackwhack
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was sooo good. It made me cry. I'd be just as happy if you didn't continue it as I would be if you did. I liked the whole thing it was so well written. If you were going to continue it, although I don't know if you should, I think maybe you should have everyone think he is dead, like an announcement in the Prophet so Hermione can grieve or something then have him turn up a few years later after Voldemort is dead. Maybe I'm just being fluffy LOL I can't help it I love Draco when he's like this. You could just leave it though, I don't think it needs to be continued. This is definately going on my recommended reading list.
person :)
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please write more it is awesome... dare i say one of the best is not the best... bring draco back, please
person 0o0itznitelite
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
0o000 i really dink u should make a sequel... reallly good start.. i likeee..
person Chavela
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the greatest stories I have ever read.
I really hope you continue with this and do a sequel. I mean how passionate it was. How something that intense couldn't sontinue. It would be a sin. I cried and actually felt the emotion in this story. You can really only put yourself where it is real and that felt real. I just loved it so much. I really REALLY hope it continues. And of course hope Draco got away alive or something. I just need to see this continue. NEED. NEED, desperately need. Please?!?!?!?
PEACE Isa

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