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I LOVED it! It was so emotional and Hot!! It would be great if you could write more chapters. Thanx

Beautiful.. that was simply beautiful. please say you'll write more of this! :) I almost cried at the end. When she flashed back to him saying he loved her, but hopefully it will all work out for 'moine, and that Draco will live... PLEASE say Draco will live... *Begging* ;P well i hope u do continue.. later!

i can't believe this only has four stars right now!!!! i love it so much and it deserves nothing below five! some other stories that have five do not deserve them, but have them anyway. well you now have about 90 reviews so readers do love it. i read the other reviews and saw the one with the your and you're stuff and although i do not recall them but there were a couple of mistakes for exmple i believe the word was 'on' but you ment it to be 'of' it's a common mistake don't feel bad even betas can over look that stuff. it happens. And with the ovulation (sp) situation i do think wow that was creepy, but i liked it. not everyone will like the same things. i love this story as do, as it would seem many others! please update for another chapter this seems very promising! also please don't take reviewers reviews the wrong way i do believe they were only tring to help. well that's if you do take it wrong like some do and don't continue, but please do! i really do love this. i 'm done with my babbling, sorry lol! :)

Hope you would continue this...Its a nice story by the way!

YOU MUST WRITE A SEQUAL!!! this is so good i hope that harry and ron show up and if they do i hope there ok with this the possabilitys you could make them still love her or shun her dont let them shun her tho this was so sad let draco live

PPPLLLLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEEEE DONT END IT HERE. tHIS STORY IS SO GOOD. I NEEDTO KNOW WAT HAPPENS. GREAT STORY. ONE OF THE BEST I HAVE READ.

Amaizing, really thats all I can say, I am at a loss for words. I love this as a one shot but at the same time I want so much more from the story. I love the open ending and cant decide if adding more would rune the emotional power of the story that you have alread achieved. Very good job regardless

I really liked it and would love to see more... but that review (the only one a read that wasn't 100% "I love this story") I have to say I kinda agree. It was really verbosly stated but whoever it was has a point. I read your A/N and I get that you don't want to change anything... but when you put something out there, you're gonna get some critics... But, while the ANON above could have said it a little better, it's more like advice for future writing... or least that's how *I* mean it... though I guess i haven't actually said anything yet. It's fan fiction, it's meant to be fun, and yeah... this would totally never happen in JK's world (or ours lol) but that doesn't mean it's not entertaining- most fan fiction is only entertaining when it's a tad off-the wall. This was hot, it left me wanting more. Could it use work stylistically? Sure but you've made it clear you don't wanna work any more on this part so move forward. I guess what I'm trying to say (with little success) is that I agree with all of the reviews... the couple of hundred that start with "OMG" and the only one that had a problem. Critisicm is healthy. Learn and grow. :) Peace out.

I loved the story. plzzzz write more that was really good.

write more!!! please? please, please, please?! it's wonderful