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by bellgirl

person Emma
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it even more...making the fantasy hit back to reality was a brilliant move!!! I really love this!
person rush22
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
still love the story and i hope that you decide to continue with it! keep up the good work!
person Mei Kim
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very infectious and I definately like how you put it up in the air whether Draco's actually dead or not. I look forward to reading more. If you need a beta, feel free to email.

~Mei
person AphroDite
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ur story is good...i like it a lot...continue a.s.a.p....cant wait...cant wait...hehehehe....
person moreta
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...still so bloody emotional...i am soo glad that you decided to continue...i am soo looking forward to the next chapter...post it soon
person KELLI
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story but you absolutely cannot end it there! I have to say I agree with the previous reviewer about the the whole ovulation thing-it works too hard and it does take you out of the story. Nevertheless, I adore Draco and you absolutely have to save him! Please continue!
person impatient
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
absoulutley awesome story!! please keep going!!!!! its really original, i dont think this has been done before, so keep going! please make daco show up again, the baby needs a dad!!!
person Chavela
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was very moving. I really like this. I am so glad that you updated this. You can imagine my elation when I got on and saw this. I was so excited and happy with how wonderfully written this was as well as the first. I can't wait to find out what and where this progresses to and to find out what is happenong with Draco. I am glad that Hermione is finding such a close confidant in Calvin and that Harry and Ginny are supporting her. Not surprised about Ron though, he always seems to take everything personal and you captured his personality so well. Well until the next update... I can't wait.
PEACE
person stacy
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! i love this story! you have to have to have to make another chapter! please! i beg you! update soon!
person Kyrian
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that can so not be the end!! come on! be nice to us D/Hr shippers and let him survive!!! please please please
very hot by the way!