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by bellgirl

person Edel
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update update update update update!!! And email me when you do? Thanks so much! ;) brill fic!!
person fiona
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved this chapter, calvin is a nice guy it's nice that she has someone else besides ginny while ron and harry arn't there. he seems like a good friend. i thought that the part with the dream was so dreamlike good job! and the part with the pillow and the bear very sweet. please i beg you update soon i really love this! :)
person Heather
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you continue this story. I like it and I can tell that it will unravel to be even better as it goes on. Just please dont kill Draco off! It's your story so you can if you want...but i feel it would ruin it, it would be so sad. Anyway, I LOVE IT and can't wait to read more! Great Job.
person nique
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!! I really enjoyed this chapter, even though Ron was a punk.
person curlyq2713
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay, you're continuing! good chapter.

being a "love child" isn't scandalous at all though...

:-)
person spanky_mcwhackwhack
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was good but I have mixed feelings as to whether I liked the fic better when it was just a 'one-shot'. I don't know... I guess some people need more closure about what happened afterwards. I debated whether to read chapter 2 because I kind of wanted to just leave it, but, as they say, curiosity killed the cat!! ^_^ Well now that I've read chapter 2 you have to keep updating, or I will sic my flying monkeys on you!! I mean it!! ^_^
person southern cross
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! you continued! so i am glad that there is gonna be more. but, where is draco????? and i am not sure if i like this calvin bloke? seemed a little to friendly with hermione, but then he inquired after ginny, so ok.

that dream! most scary! where is draco??? sorry. i loved the bit where she put the pillow under her shirt. very cute.

~Sara~
person Shiky
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome.... hope you update soon
person over joyed
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm so glad u continued with this story!!!!!!!!!!!!! when will draco show up?!?!?!!? can't wait till the next chapter! :)
person geo
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOw... I loved it. Please continue! love! i think your an amazing writer with just enought detail and not too much crap. I love your characters, and your plot is different and fresh. Thanks! Update!

geo

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