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for A Last Request

by bellgirl

person Vicky
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!! He's Aliiiiiiiiiive!! <33 YAY!
person southern cross
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thank heavens!!!

i am so glad we got mention of draco. love the harry/herm interaction as well as the twins. they were all well written into the story. cannot wait for more.
person KrazyKiwi
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter! Please update soon. I shall be waiting in vain...
P.S. I hope we'll be hearing from Draco again soon...
person Inspire
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3: Wonderfully written chapter. I particularly like your characterization of Ron, which is much more 3-dimensional than the normal fanfic Ron in HG/DM stories. Please update soon.
person Experience My Dreams
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW I love it don't you dare think about stopping!!!!
person Chavela
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so great. I loved that last part. I loved the whole thing infact. But with Ron being so open and honest and finally opening his eyes and really seeing. You made him so mature which only made the ease more rapid. I loved it. And I loved the way you tied off the end of the chapter. I thought it was really great. I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it comes real soon.
PEACE Isa
person Hunidew
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! YAY!! He's alive...THANK MERLIN
person Rose
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is far too sappy for me...the end of the first chapter just dissappointed me because everyone was OOC and I thought there would be a twist, or a surpise. Not another redeemed!misunderstood!Draco. Although it was cliche, it was not badly written. :)
person fiona
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh no a cliffy! i can't wait to see what happens! and yay draco is alive! i love this update!
person OffTopic
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG PLEASE UPDATE! I'm hooked!