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for A Last Request

by bellgirl

person Jecilia
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that you're doing a GREAT job! I love the way you write, its so captivating! Your fluff scenes are very yummy, and I believe everyone's reaction to Hermione's pregnancy is quite accurate. I thought the whole Fred and George laughing part was funny, 'cause it seemed so like them. Draco seemed a bit out of character, but it made sense to me as I read on. I knew you'd still keep him alive, heh. I've only spotted a few errors, but they're only minor mistakes, we're all normal humans anyway. I hope you continue this story, I really love it! I encourage you to write more! =] Keep up the good work!
person lemonade
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love this! More would be wonderful!
person Heather
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!! This story is AMAZING! I love the way you made Ron, I was getting so tired of all the stories where he won't forgive her and hates her and such, this Ron is so much better! I can NOT wait for your next chapter! Update SOON!!!
person Edel
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww... loved the 2nd last line... brilliant chapter. Loved how Ron realised Hermione's feelings towards Draco before she did. And thanks for emailing me about the update, don't suppose you could do so again with the next chapter? Thanks!
person curlyq2713
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes!!! oh thank goodness! yay for updating so soon, you're doing so great! update soon plleaaase :-)
person Erin
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is really great! I hope you keep updating!
person Slave4severus
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! Don't stop now!! I need at least ten more chapters to satisfy THIS fix. Great job. You hace captured my attention and heald it....now i require more. LOL
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you are right i do love this fic ron came around and draco lives. lets go for the whole deal 2 more to go lol im just kidding intresting how you put fred and george in there and you had there charecters perfect shes losing her last meal and they ask to record the sound priceless tho i was both touched and sad at the ron/hermione revelation poor poor ron but as least all of them are still sticking by her which is good keep going update soon
person Anon
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY 4 DRACO!!!!!! but wat did the letter say? u r very mean tto let us hang like that! update!
person gotjic_samurai93
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DAMN you cliffy!!!!!!!!update A.S.A.P.