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dun continue they need to get back together

aff fics don't get that many reviews unless they are really killer. Actually I noticed that ff.net is the only place where you can get a particularly large amount of reviews with less effort so don't look to far into it. Your story is okay if not a bit OOC on Remus's part especially with the explaining part. That was a bit rushed and below level on explainations of why they suddenly had sex in the common room. You should have made it where they were in the dorm and James and Peter had left off somewhere. You shouldn't make Remus so...wanton, maybe? And it got a bit saturated with the I don't care I just want to please you and such. At least one of them should have some experience-Sirius, he is the one that has known he was gay since 3rd year. He had to have dated around a little bit since then, right?

Please write more. It is a good story.

It is a beautiful story of love, lust, loss, and sorrow. I enjoyed it very much. Keep writing sweetz! You are great. Thankz for the deddication.

I love the detail in this story. I can understand feeling that the world and the people that you love are moving on while you are left behind. Please update soon.

Grittie