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for Family Heirlooms (Edited/complete)

by HPHGfan1

schedule December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No one can apparate or disapparate within Hogwarts unlss the headmaster/ headmisstress undoos the protective charmes within that aria.
Meaning McGonagall CAN disapparate, taking the sister with her, but Harry can't apparate to the Griffindor dorm.
sorry, it's just not possible.

appart from this 'little' mistake, I realy like your FF!
person angel
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwwww that was sad .. but im glad it had a happy endding ... in till you next story .. later for now

angel
person Zyx
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love this story, MORE!!!!!!!!!!
I really really like reading, and I write a little bit myself too :P
But I always find it's harder to write fanfic because the characters are not your own,
but you're doing fantastic! :D I can't get enough :O
Must... Read... MORE!!! :P
But I think you should put some more Harry and Hermione love in it :P
This isn't called ADULT fan fiction for nothing XD
I love this story, give me more right now! :O
And I can't stop going on about how good this story is :O
Me=LoveYourStory
You=ReallyGoodWriter
Spam, spam, I LOVE THIS STORY, I love hermione :O and I don't love harry but I'm ok with it :I :P
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love this fanfic. i am getting so into it. i really like what you are doing with the plot.
person angel
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow .. what did happen to lilly's ring .. what are they going to do now .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please udpate soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person pudding
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, can only hope for longer chapters, and another chapter of course
person MrPants
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story I realy wish the chapters were longer,
person skittles
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE!! write more longer chapters I love the story but OH such a cliffhanger ending, it's going to drive me insane waiting to see what happens next, Where did Mcgonagal take the twin sister too?
person angel
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great ... now they have meet ...will harry stay there .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person mel
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
just read this and have to say its awsome!!!!!