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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story
Good job editing it
It seems much better now
Oh how I love spite and revenge!
It's just so exciting
Might want to take the story out of Hermione/Draco
Just go to your Author Panel
Click Edit Story
Then choose the story and edit details
You should be able to change it there
And don't worry,you have the potential to do just as good if not better than me at any story
It's all about plot
Update soon
Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
Good job editing it
It seems much better now
Oh how I love spite and revenge!
It's just so exciting
Might want to take the story out of Hermione/Draco
Just go to your Author Panel
Click Edit Story
Then choose the story and edit details
You should be able to change it there
And don't worry,you have the potential to do just as good if not better than me at any story
It's all about plot
Update soon
Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so i really liked it that hermoine wore an AFI t shirt, thats sweet, Your chapters are short but if you keep updating often people wont mind that they are short.. Keep writing :P
Magz
Magz
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February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, there are some good elements to your story. I'd suggest slowingdown the plot a bit, and working on character development. Also, think about getting a beta reader, or at least proofreading it yourself.
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Colin has bad taste!
Haha...insteresting chapter.
Hermione scares me...
She's really clingyishh
Good story.
Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
Haha...insteresting chapter.
Hermione scares me...
She's really clingyishh
Good story.
Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHH GOD MY EYES ARE BURNING I CANT BELIVE YOU MADE COLIN DO THAT hahahahahah still good chapter..hmm your getting better at your sex scenes though ..5
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far! But I'm just wondering if this story is in the right section? Or is it building up from a HG/Hp to a DM/HG? Either way the story is great
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha,nice Andiee.
How kinky,
Sex on a train on the way to school
I can't even pronounce Eduardo's last name haha.
Keep up the good work.
Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y-xX
How kinky,
Sex on a train on the way to school
I can't even pronounce Eduardo's last name haha.
Keep up the good work.
Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y-xX
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel a threesome comming on hahahaha
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LoL Poor kitty and the being trapped in Dudleys butt hahahahaha ..Did it live? AMAZING RAIN!!
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good start!