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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely written. You do a nice job with the dialogue. It's very in character for both of them. I also like that they don't go all the way, even though smut is so much fun, because that makes the story more plausible. Besides, it opens up possibilities for the future.... Thanks for a very enjoyable one-shot. I think I need to check out your other story. By the way, what other fanfic site are you on and under what author name?
Jeanne
Jeanne
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it needs a sequal. It was too good not to have one.
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW.... that's all I can say. A very visceral, primal, carnal experience. Amazing prose. Thank you for a lovely one shot ;)
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh....that was amazing.
So sad that they didn't get together but oh well.
So sad that they didn't get together but oh well.
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a f-cking awesome story man. it sucked me in. but i also had some good music on
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job!!! Please tell me there are plans to add to this fic!!!
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What do I think? I think it was an amazing piece of writing, that's what I think. Please, please, please....leave it as a one shot! It is so powerful and heartrending.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I FEEL BAD FOR HIM BUT I LIKE IT UPDATE SOON
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wicked!
This was just... awesome. Damn Hermione for being all sensible and saying what she said!
The angst was perfect.
Bek
This was just... awesome. Damn Hermione for being all sensible and saying what she said!
The angst was perfect.
Bek
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thinks he needs to claim her. In front of ron and harry would be a nice touch (pansy, too). After reading another story, I need a jealous ron story. Yours is perfect!
Nice job..."storm" was cool.
Nice job..."storm" was cool.