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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good story! Great and utterly believable UST.
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH COME ON!! thats was freaking brilliant!! you have to keep going with that!! props with the creativity by the way!!...wow there are just no words to describe that!! wow!
please write more!! please!!
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great writing!
please write more!! please!!
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great writing!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Le gasp! I loved this! *starts chanting* Sequel, sequel, sequel, sequel...
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
But but...it can't end! I'm not satisfied! I want them to do the nasty, dammit! Please, just two more chapters, tops? Please? Lady Bunny Goddess demands this of thee!
Anyway, if you don't write more, I'm pissed. But thanks for getting me so caught up in the story and ending it, forcing me to remember it's a oneshot. I really enjoyed it, while it lasted. *sigh* This story would've been great too...*runs of crying* THANKS FOR RUINING MY FUN! Because of you, I'm being forced back to yaoi! *runs off*
Anyway, if you don't write more, I'm pissed. But thanks for getting me so caught up in the story and ending it, forcing me to remember it's a oneshot. I really enjoyed it, while it lasted. *sigh* This story would've been great too...*runs of crying* THANKS FOR RUINING MY FUN! Because of you, I'm being forced back to yaoi! *runs off*
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its good i like it alot hope that u continnue annd hope that they get together
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really great story, new idea and wonderful at that!
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!! I wish you would write more!! I LOVED the way the story revolved around the storm, so hot! I was just sad it ended so sad :( I hope you write a sequel soon!
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So very close, tantalizingly close, and yet so far away. *sigh* Believable, but a bit dry. Lacks emotion (only truly present at the end) and depth. Needs more color and imagery. Perhaps you could expand on the storm? Make us see it, feel it's intensity as Hermione did. Though I did feel sorry for Draco, it doesn't make my heart drop just yet and I know you're capable of it. Quidditch felt incongruent. I would have opened it differently.
Still, it was very good- better than most, but still lacking flavor.
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Still, it was very good- better than most, but still lacking flavor.
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. Love it.
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn it Granger just can't let a good thing happen now can't she. Great job on the story.