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oh, *sadly sighs* this was so sweet I can't help but wish you gave me an alternate happy ending. Hermione wants to be an unpredictable storm right? sooo, maybe she would be if Malfoy became her thunder...oops that sounds kind of dirty. lol. I am very pleased that I foudn this shot, and hope that you write more because you are too damn good, what an imagination!

I found your author's page on the AFF forums. Lucky me! :) I loved this so much. The end just killed me... so sad, but in a weird sweet way. The storm as a plot device was just lovely. (I love storms, too) :) Very well written, believable dialogue. The tension was as palatable as the lightening would be. The only thing that kind of distracted me for a minute was the change in font from regular to italics. Don't know if this has already been mentioned, as I haven't read the other reviews. (bad me lol) Off to my author's page to add this one to my rec. reading... hope to read more of your work soon! :)

Wow! Thank you for the very well written piece. I really enjoyed the builtup and let down. Very much in character for Hermione. Draco was strog but sensative without losing all that is Draco. Wonderful! i like it as a one shot!

I loved it!

great fic!


But damn you for not allowing them to end up together @ the end! *sniffs* POOR DRACO!!!

well.... that was good ... i liked it

Please.....Make this more than a one shot!! I want it to work out between them, and you writing style is wonderful.
(Stamps foot dramatically)

Thanx Lensa

keep going please

that was hot

that was sooooooooooooo sad

Wonderful story. Too bad its a one shot. Sad ending, but probably a more realistick one for them. Then again, it's house unity that will help win the war so who knows.

Great job with this though. Thanks for sharing.