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for 10 Things I Hate About You

by BlackxBellax

person Redlightspin
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*swoon*
person Caz
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT!!! OMG the end of year gifts bit was incredible!! Ooooh you\'ve made my day!
person cruttan
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Bek! This is *wonderful!*

I loved so much about it. Where to begin?

Sticks and stones can break my bones but names can not harm me. It
person LunaGrrl
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!! Girl, I don't have the words to tell you just how much I loved this story! This was just hot, Hot, HOT! And I loved the fact that you included the poem from "Ten Things I Hate About You" that is one of my favorite movies. I even own the soundtrack. You did an absolutely wonderful job with this! Seriously, honey I this was amazing. I loved every second of it. Remember to keep up the good work and to keep writing. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you very soon!!!

~Luna ^__^
person Lura
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly loved this. 10 Things I Hate About You has always reminded me of Hermione and Draco. And I love the way you conformed the poem to fit them. The entire story line was perfect. You did a great job on this.
person Jes
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I... absolutely loved it! You literally made me laugh out loud, hysterically (to the point where my sister came in the room and told me to shut up) when I read the part where Draco hexed Hermione to rhyme everything she said. It was beautifully written, I adored it, and I wouldn't mind seeing it written from Draco's POV either. And btw, 10 Things I Hate About You, yeah, one of the best chick-flicks ever!
person jchaser
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...that was incredible...loved your writing and the premise to bring us such a climatic and wonderful ending!
person Stacy
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was brilliant!
I loved it!
person MONA
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOW SWEET I LOVED IT!
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, i loved and disliked this. i thought the ten things i hate about you thing was brilliant, it was absolutely beautiful and you captured the angst, the tension, the hate, and the passion perfectly. it almost made me cry because it was so perfect. i don't cry. however, in the second half things turned sour...or should i say sappily-sweet. and hey, if you want a draco who scatters rose petals and abandons his wonderful slytherinness, that's your fanfic. but the story was too rushed for a oneshot...you had too much happen in the second half of the story to make it in one chapter. i understand life is busy, but even three chapters would have been better than one, and leaving the "ten things" list as a list would have been better than continuing it.
the perfect way to do this story would have been to end it very soon after the list, leaving all the fluff and perhaps ending it with a very passionate kiss or something like that. the rushed fluff at the end kinda spoiled it. i hope this helps...i would really like to see the list posted by itself with a new ending! keep writing.