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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was weird!
Just read your story and your reviews. I have to say, my respect for swallowing all that harsh criticism!
The basic writing style and gramma aside (enough has been said and you are definitely improving), I have to say I actually thought there was some rather original stuff about your story which irritated me and made me go in my head "ehy, this is just WEIRD" but I found it positive as well, because it had elements that I have not come across before. The first thing that stroke me as different to what happens in most fics of this kind was that Snape kicked her when she was on the floor. That was challenging me and I liked that. I like Snape dark and evil and brutal, but that was a new image suddenly invading my mind and surprising me. I'm not sure if I liked it but it definitely had an effect, which is a good thing.
I think that was quite brave of you to involve and describe actions that where not stuff that you have read in other stories as well so you knew people are ok with that. This story had a few bits that really weren
Just read your story and your reviews. I have to say, my respect for swallowing all that harsh criticism!
The basic writing style and gramma aside (enough has been said and you are definitely improving), I have to say I actually thought there was some rather original stuff about your story which irritated me and made me go in my head "ehy, this is just WEIRD" but I found it positive as well, because it had elements that I have not come across before. The first thing that stroke me as different to what happens in most fics of this kind was that Snape kicked her when she was on the floor. That was challenging me and I liked that. I like Snape dark and evil and brutal, but that was a new image suddenly invading my mind and surprising me. I'm not sure if I liked it but it definitely had an effect, which is a good thing.
I think that was quite brave of you to involve and describe actions that where not stuff that you have read in other stories as well so you knew people are ok with that. This story had a few bits that really weren
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
demented
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great and im glad the mione is there for snape and they can learn to love each other .. i cant wait in till you next story and in till then later for now
angel
angel
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okkkk...I am just speechless..i dont know what to say
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i hope he cant change her mind in time .. ans what are you going to do mione ...please please update soon ..later for now
angel
angel
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"except the soft snoring of two people laying together as they clanged to each other." Clanged? Dictionary definition:
1. A loud, resonant, metallic sound.
2. The strident call of a crane or goose.
BETA, please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1. A loud, resonant, metallic sound.
2. The strident call of a crane or goose.
BETA, please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm.....very intresting chapter
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
bad Lucius and Draco...they are so freaky...lol
Great chapter!!!
Great chapter!!!