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for How Long has it Been

by ffaddict

person wildcat
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so on edge in regards to this story i am dying to know what snape wants
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great chapter! I can't wait to read more! Hope you will be updating soon!

Tiffany
person Angie30
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have certainly peaked my interest! Wonders what Severus wants of Hermione. Please update soon.
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A few spelling and punctuation errors..but I think this is gonna be a pretty good story...the first 3 chapters were pretty good!
cant wait for more
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wheeewwww!!!! that was soo good...lol as for helping u out sure..i would do as much as i can...and i will also ask my beta..DarkestDawn...she's real good...email me if ur intrested.....Wonderful chapter btw!
person Cristie
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad start. Personally I would like to see a slightly faster flow, but that's just me. I'm still waiting to see what happens at Hogwarts. I look forward to your next installment.