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for Rimshots: Nothing Changes

by Kit84

person Kesha
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really good.
I hope you put up more soon
person vlredreign
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kit, this was brilliant. Mine was PWP, Ali's was schmoopy, and yours was just...whoa. Between you and knightmare, I don't know who angsted better. Angsted...is that a word? lol I'm thinking of a new challenge for us for the new year...you game? *weg*
person dee_warbrooke
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this. I hope you continue. It would make a wonderful story. Even if you decide to leave it alone, it's beautiful! You kept Draco so canon. He really seems to be able to divide his life into neat little segments. It's easy for me to believe Draco could love Harry with all his heart, but still continue to follow his pure blood ideals. It truly seems to be what all true pure bloods do. He would probably not marry for love in canon anyway, so losing Harry in the end would have happened even without a Dark Lord being in the way. O course, I would love to be proven wrong. I love my happy Draco/Harry endings.

If you keep this in the same theme, I would like to see one more chapter. It would be nice to have Draco's POV after the shower scene. Perhaps, something to do with his feelings/reasons for telling Harry he loved him. It's not often we readers get to see Draco's motives after he admits to loving Harry. Often we are left wondering if it was a mind trip of Draco's or if he truly meant it.
person hp_reader
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This one is just so perfectly HOT! And I have to agree w/the other reviewer - what about doing a Draco POV - that would be awesome see his thoughts on this one!
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Everytime I reread this I want more! I want this to continue!