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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I looooooooooooove your fics!!!! I hope you will soon whrite the next chapter! How will Harry be with Draco? Will Harry be pregnant? I hope he will! Bye
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I looooooooooooove your fics!!!! I hope you will soon whrite the next chapter! How will Harry be with Draco? Will Harry be pregnant? I hope he will! Bye
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good start. I'm certainly looking forward to more. I'll have to agree with Annie; more details will add *so* much more to your characters. Right now they seem somewhat...flat, I guess you could say. More details will add dimension to your characters, make them seem a bit more "real."
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love all of your stories, when you are going to write more for the other ones and this one to.
update soon please.
update soon please.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter . i hope to read more of this story
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice!
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice!
Like it!
Continue...
MOREMOREMORE!!!
Like it!
Continue...
MOREMOREMORE!!!
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow I really like this. You really need to intergrade more...feelings or thoughts of your characters, it'll make them seem real and give your story more depth. Other than that it is really very good and I hope you write more soon, Please and Thank You.
I hope your muse(s) is/are good to you.
Happy Writings.
I hope your muse(s) is/are good to you.
Happy Writings.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool start this sounds very interesting please continue soon
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it starts romantic and hot. I like it much!!