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for The Sacrifice

by LeoZodiac

person Reader
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting plot. Only I guess it is knight bus and maybe Harry is a little bit too docile, but thr story is fine/
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you've got to update...I want to know how the rest of the weekend goes.

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Nemesis ^_~
person Donavon
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the idea. However, surely this would be disclosure to the muggle world. I'm not sure whether
the story line could go that way without problems.
person yoblossom
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*laughs hysterically* omg! that was great! now... have her blow up like a ballon again, but let her keep her memory! hahahaha!
person JJ
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Neat idea!!! You're going to show the Dursley's the wizarding world. I hope you have a lot of really gross things planned for them!!!!
person momoko
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, I like it, will Harry get pregnant?, bye
person Rachel
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehehehe, I know it may as well be that nothing else will happen... well, it's not likely given who we are talking about (the Dudleys) but I already had fun in this chapter.

Can't wait for Vernon's turn.
person Jai
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story! quite original in my idea! i hope you will continue! Please, if you do continue, email me at Babygrl45765@aol.com with the website to the next chapter. I'm eager to read the next chapter if there is one. Bye bye!
-Jai
person J@DE
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE the plot of this story and I hope its gets even better as you write more of it. Can't wait to read MORE!!!! :)
person nita
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heyy just got to tell u that i love this fic and everyone u have writtin so far even the one i never thought i would read but i find your stories wonderful and i cant wait to a new chapter for any of your stories. which i hope u will have a new chappie for all ANYWAYZ have fun writin
-Nita