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for The Sacrifice

by LeoZodiac

person moony2
schedule March 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story/ Please complete all of your stories. i love to read them. I love LMHP stories. update soon.
person Tyrisha
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes! that teaches her for cheating on a hunk of a man like Lucius
person lilio
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more please
person barbara
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with this story already (:



please update soon
person Rachel
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great Story! I just looked at your author pagr and like 3 of my favorite stories are yours. Keep up the great writing.
person Kagaya
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, rapist or potential rapist should be made impotent.

Kyaa, Lucius is so protective.
Harry on the other hand has to start to gain some self confidence. Hmm...

Narcissa finally makes an appearance, what trouble would she cause now.
Is this going to be a mpreg? Harry and Lucius's kid would just be so cute.

I think Lucius and Harry pairing are nice to read, cause Harry is sometimes given to much burden that he is forced to grow up quicker than other kids. So, sometimes kids his own age just ain't mature enough don't you think?
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! Can't wait for chapter 4! What will Narcissa do?
person mona
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, where are Remus, Sirius and Marge, did they just disappear? Also, you wrote Lucius got out of bed to follow Harry, and then he got out of bed again when his ring heated up. Did you forget what you wrote before?
person Eci_Frog
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.......
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cackles* serves the bitch right!