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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update please
K.
K.
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue soon!! I want to read more of your story, and how Severus and Harry get together!!
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Good story line with lots of potential. Can't wait for more. Love Harry's "friend". What next? :)
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Decent start, however you are in need of a beta to correct spelling and grammar. You get your tenses mixed up from time to time. I'm looking forward to more.
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A marvelous story and I can' wait to read more; I really want to see what happens when Harry and Severus wake up, lol. Keep up the very good work and please update soon.
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok you have real potential but you really need a BETA you also need to pick a tense to write in. Most people prefer reading in past tense 3rd person. If you have any questions about what I have posted feel free to email me. Right now this story is very hard to read.
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a riot!
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wonderful update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ack... now you HAVE TO update soon! More more more!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You need a grammar review. Please use whole sentences and don't change tenses.