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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my I want more its an amazing story!!!
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am going to put this story on hold.... If y'all would send me and email so I can know who all wants to know when I get ready to repost it..... I want to make it more understandable and more readable (if there is such a thing).... Sorry guyz
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what? This makes no sense. uhh email me at Doxkid@hotmail.com to explian this please.
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like your story so far I know most people just ignore when people complain but i just want to make a statement your first 4 chapters are decently written(I am not a grammer expert so i dont know exactly how well written they are)this last chapter it just seems like 1.You rushed it which with what the chapter covers you had alot to work with. 2It seems like the chapter is just a bunch of ideas thrown together without takeing the timeout for each topic you brought up. My suggestion to you would be to take down chapter 5 rewrite it the story dosen't have to be constantly updated take your time i would rather 1 decent sized chapter monthly then a short rushed one. Now that i got done saying that I like how you came up with the idea for harry to get children it was a pretty original idea and i do look forward to whatever you post even if you dont change chapter 5 regardless i plan to continue reading.
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well its a good story with a nice plot. but i dont think its very captivating because it lacks action or even any lemony scenes.. hopefully those come into play soon.
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAH , I already wish there were more chapters.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great so far i look forward to when you update.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting and I think it'll be great! Update soon :)