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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 5 - Interesting background with Severus and his former wife and then to have the mirror image happen to Hermione gave him the strength to break through his lethargy. It was a painful chapter to read but necessary I believe to folow your story and their characterization. I'm wondering how they are going to get to the headquarters though when everytime Hermione tried before, she would just end up in a different place with more Deatheaters around her. Keep going, I am hooked.
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The second chapter was better than the first!! Keep it up!! :D
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far. I don't mind violence as long as it has a point in the story. so many other authors will put it in just for shock and awe. One bit of advice...I would post a disclaimer at the beginning so the story doesn't get booted off the site! Otherwise, keep up the good work!
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very very curious. You are giving us little peeks of the past interspersed with the suffering Hermione and Snape are currently both afflicted with. It continues to be heart wrenching.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. Poor Severus. Glad he has Hermoine to help him.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has the makings of a great story! Please continue and update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Tiffany
Tiffany
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor violated sevvie.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Great chapter! I can't wait to read more. Please update again and soon.
Tiffany
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1 - Wow! what an intro! You seamlessly wove information into the story. Poor Severus, practically begging to die. It was heartrending but very well done.
Why is she cut off from the Order? I was a bit puzzled here but you may be planning on addressing that later in the next chapter.
Why is she cut off from the Order? I was a bit puzzled here but you may be planning on addressing that later in the next chapter.
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start, anxiously awaiting more. Poor Severus I am so glad that Hermione found him. Looking forward to reading how this story will develope.