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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Boring!! There is nothing Boring about this fic. I think you've done a fine job crafting the storyline and I really like how you've portrayed Sevrus and Hermione's characters. I think the only way they are going to heal is with each other. They now can understand each other on a soul deep level. Good Job! I'm looking forward to reading chapter 9
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have heard tell that your reviewers have left you. So I deided to become one. I luv ur story, and have been following all along, but I'm not exactly a review kind of person. I think your story is really good, and it is taking twists that I have never seen a story take before. I'm still a little confused about but the beginning, but I suppose it will all be explained later. So luv ur story, keep it up, and all that jazz. Oh and I award you a giant plate of virtual cookies for your work so far.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! I just read your story. please continue. It is awesome. It is very graphic but also very well written. Keep up the good work. And there is no way in hell that this is a boring story!!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have been following your story from the beginning and I apologise for not reviewing sooner. I really like your story but I do have a little constructive critizism. I find it a little disjointed in places, you need to make your story flow more smoothly between scene changes, and could you elaborate a bit more about what happened to find Hermione wandering a forest and Severus being held captive by deatheaters. As I have said earlier I really like your story, it has an interesting plot and a great deal of potential, so please keep going.
Toodles.
Toodles.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. You have done a great job of allowing the reader to feel the emotion of the characters. Please continue.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great update, I am glad that Hermione will go with Severus and be with him. Worth the wait..
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
no you haven't lost anyone. We are all still here patiently awaiting our lemons. :0)
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent writing.... please do continue!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have not lost me, I am just also been reading it at fanfiction.net. This site updates sooner. You have outdone yourself with this chapter. The angst between Severus and Hermione was heartwrenching. I was glad that Hermione realizes now that she and Severus have experienced the same pain. Update again soon.