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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very well written!
Although, I would have preferred a "happily-ever-after".
Although, I would have preferred a "happily-ever-after".
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 9: Your 'voyage' was quite a successful one. Lovely and sweet and spicy, too.
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good god man! This was the saddest fic I have ever read. And I read many. Very well written but I do hope that reality brings happiness to your muse :) Whilst we all entertain the thought of suicide once or twice (or more) in our lives, as you have made it understood it is not noble, and it could also deprive another person of love. Be well for you & for opportunities that abound. So mote it be.
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
REALLY good story! Packed with emotion and great visuals and lots and lots of nice juicy lemons! Loved it!!
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, My heart is broken :)
Write more ;)
Write more ;)
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very well written scene. Not over done and with just enough visuals to get the scene in our minds without unneccessary detail. I really enjoy the comfort stories (brings out the Florence Nightengale in me I guess). I like the way you have given us bits of what is happening outside of Harmonie finding Severus (the Order broken, Harmione not sure if Harry is alive or not, ect). It gives a subtle bleak picture of events so far and really peaks my interest to read on.
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i thought it was very well done for a first. i cried just a bit at the end and everything. wonderful.
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooooow. i was in teers as she passed away
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read this story, and I enjoyed it very much. I found it touching, and I think that the ending was more appropriate than "and then they lived together forever and had six kids" type, considering the situations.
The only criticism I have is that the transitions are a bit jerky; twice, coming from one chapter to another I was confused until I was about halfway in. But aside from that, I thought it was a quite well-done story. Bravo.
The only criticism I have is that the transitions are a bit jerky; twice, coming from one chapter to another I was confused until I was about halfway in. But aside from that, I thought it was a quite well-done story. Bravo.
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, that was sooo sad.