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Spike of Doom - don't be too sure just yet about narcissa and tonks. ;)

Treck - lmao, sick

Jamie - hmm, afraid, draco might not be redeemed. I like the ferret just the way he is in this story. As for: "no I won't stop reading if you do decide to go with Harry/Narcissa," you have no idea how badly that kind of comment is swelling my ego =P. Thank you for the vote confidence. I'll definitely consider what you have said.

No-one - Holy...SHIT!!! long review. Very good points. I'll be sending a reply to your email-box to address my position on Hermione specifically, but I'll comment on the rest of the girls bellow.

Ginny - If she did that, she's liable to be lynched by Harry's more fanatical girls/worshippers. =P Interesting idea about the patils.
Katie Bell - on a broomstick?...this deserves some thinking on my part.
Luna - Good idea, but I am really bad at writing her specifically so I'll have to think about it.
Susan - "You also have to watch out for the quite ones." **nod**
Tracy/Daphne - " May need some Disciplining." I see someone has read Big D's "the News" ;)

o my vote is all but narsscisection

Silverdagger - Good, I'm glad some people are getting the point that Fleur and now Harry aren't entirely human. BDSM is part of their nature. As for:

"Harry should probably not go that far (ie: thinking actual rape/enslavement is a good and wonderous thing to inflict on people)"

You are absolutely correct. Harry won't nearly go that far. His progression into 'darkness' will be quite tame (two steps forward and a step back in hesitation kind of thing) and hopefully realistic. He won't drop into doing/enjoying rape/enslave type of thing. Though, I'll say that there are other means of breaking a human being.

Another awesome chapter!
My votes for all the candidates except Narcissa.
Update soon!

Great story. Update soon.

Definately Mrs./Miss Malfoy/Black and Tonks.

Also does harry win all the stuff from the Death Eaters that he killed. Since it was a dual, abit not a fair one but still a dual.

Also when is harry going to do some rituals and could he not go to the Banks and ask for emiptation/legal adult since no magical guardians possible.
ie parents dead. Sirius wanted criminals and Auntie not possible candiate.

Also have harry create a mark, abit a invisible one. ie modify the one tom uses, since he wants to show the world his army, while harry wants to keep his a secret thus making him different from the other Male Veelas, thus having a better chance of winning since they can be anyone. Also mind talk possible via marks thus spy and ministry personals not found out.

Also did Lucy ie Mr Malfoy die that night and HAVE SKEETER apart of his harem or army.

Have harry create a deaging potion with possible balisks vemon as key componant since hard to get not potion masters have made it. also use muggle DNA as key principle when brewing it. ALso have this potion a secret.

NICE

FREDDIE

I love the list of potentials for Harry's future harem. I submit one vote for each applicant. The possibility of Harry having a "menage a twin" with the Patils always amuses me.

vampire,Drow seem interesting

Really liked it. Better way of handlig Veela than I have seen. So lets see where this goes

Another good chapter and I like how harry is so suave in everything he does. its cool that he can do all of that so perfectly and really fun to read about it all coming together :) im glad narcissa and tonks are still in the running. they would be my favs, im also glad that your playing with the idea of a magical creature (Ex: werewolf, vamp elf) very cool characters and lemons those can make!